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Poem

So yeah I wrote this, its about my brother.  It's not my best but there is just something about it that I like.  I hope you like it....

 

He was young; a father, brother, and a son
He was my brother for fourteen years but, I truly only knew him for one
All of the sudden he was taken away
I will never forget that phone call on that awful arctic winter day

If only I could turn back time
Before he committed that horrible crime
Oh how I wish I could erase every fight
Especially that one on our very last night

I will never forget those last words I said
I hate you Kris as my face flushed with red
If only he knew what a lie that was
Oh gosh, I really hope he does


Heroin was his cause of death
That needle took his last breath
But, he wasn't the only one to pay
I still cry every single day

I get so many nightmares were I watch him die
And all I can do is sit back and cry
As he takes the drug and turns as white as a snow
My heart experiences an all time low

Why won't the sorrow disappear?
Why can't I stop shedding the tears?


Posted on 11/18/2007 12:57 PM Visits: 12
yesxtoxyou: 11/19/2007 7:36 PM
awww. this is amazing. its so powerful, and really well written. i feel so sad now. this is a great poem.can i ask, is it all true? I'm really sorry about it if it is.
dearlyloved: 01/14/2008 12:37 AM
oh...that's.....reallyyyyy good....now...like alex said...it's so amazing..powerful. and i'm sorry about your brother =[
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